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Write Me a Winter Poem-Contest

The coldest season of the year, Up toward the northern hemisphere, Prepare for snow, all temperatures low, The solstice seems so near. Many say winter is full of grief, A boring wall picture motif, Insanely complaining, quite entertaining, While I sit here and sigh in relief. Snowfall precipitation is intriguing, And the sun is certainly deceiving, A lodge in the woods, sure sounds good, Air so cold you see when you're breathing. Cold climates reach record highs, With accumulation up to our thighs, Boots and gloves, hot cocoa and hugs, "The Bridge May Be Icy" street signs. Placed between fall and spring, Let's go to the ice skating rink, Fall on my behind, clumsy inclined, I think I may need a shrink! Written By: Laura Urbaniak Date: November 10, 2015 ~Write Me A Winter Poem~ Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 11/20/2015 4:31:00 PM
upbeat view of winter, brings back happy memories of when i used to ice skate :) congrats on your win in the contest!
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Date: 11/20/2015 8:12:00 AM
A humor with the beauty of the season, nicely done, or should I say Icely done. :)
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Date: 11/20/2015 12:33:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this lovely write Laura!
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:17:00 PM
Laura, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:43:00 PM
Thank you SKAT, you too :)
Date: 11/19/2015 3:14:00 PM
Lovely imagery and also a touch of humour to go with it, Laura! Always wanted to try ice-skating, but in our country we do not practice winter sport because the weather is not suitable. ~ Congrats on a fine win!! Regards // paul
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Date: 11/19/2015 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Paul! I don't know how to ice skate but always wanted to try. :)
Date: 11/11/2015 8:34:00 PM
You captured the essence of winter perfectly!!
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Date: 11/12/2015 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Sarita :) Be blessed -LU xxx
Date: 11/11/2015 12:31:00 AM
I like how you took a bit of humorous slant in yours. I despise the winter but the snow sure is pretty!!
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Date: 11/11/2015 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :) -LU xxx
Date: 11/10/2015 1:06:00 PM
wonderful rhyme and imagery and I love the humour Laura! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/10/2015 3:03:00 PM
Thank you for dropping in to read my poem :) -LU *smiles*

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