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Worst Morning After

I puked and spent the day in bed, 'I'll booze no more,' I groaned and said. for Susan's contest

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Date: 8/11/2013 11:12:00 AM
- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/11/2013 7:18:00 AM
Jack, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:51:00 AM
Enjoyed from experience. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:55:00 PM
Oh God! Don't I know that feeling! LOL!! Congrats on your featured writing!...Milt
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :0)
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Date: 8/5/2013 10:20:00 AM
great. Congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish
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Date: 8/5/2013 5:52:00 AM
for this reason me quit over 14 yrs ago but loved your poem and made me smile thanks for sharing and congrats on being featured
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Date: 8/2/2013 6:26:00 AM
Good decision! lol. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/2/2013 4:23:00 AM
lol like it super poem congrats on win Shadow smiles
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Date: 8/1/2013 11:03:00 PM
awesome...love...SKAT
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Date: 8/1/2013 9:57:00 PM
Hello Jack, , congratulations in Susan's "Worst Morning After..." contest. take care. xox~ LINDA ....
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Date: 8/1/2013 8:11:00 AM
well said for the short poem. Congrats on the win
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Date: 7/24/2013 9:14:00 PM
I think most of us know that feeling LOL A cute poem that made me smile. love phyl
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Date: 7/23/2013 11:39:00 PM
:-) good if you can not handle, you should not do it... love the couplet set... missing your hello's...LINDA
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Date: 7/21/2013 9:30:00 PM
Hahaha! Hilarious one, Jack! I'll be laughing for a while after reading this! My best wishes for the contest. As always, your great sense of humor comes through! x Annalise
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Date: 7/20/2013 9:09:00 PM
This is a tremendous write my friend! It's funny that you have written about this subject, I've seen people get so smashed in the night, act so goofy, then wake up the next morning so miserable, suffering for what they have done! Then the very next weekend, they do it again, and it goes on over and over all throughout their life...until their liver fades away to nothing, then they suffer in another way! So the next morning usually doesn't stop them from doing it again! Great Work my friend!!
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Date: 7/20/2013 6:47:00 PM
Just remember the good night out it makes the morning easier lol x
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Date: 7/20/2013 5:05:00 PM
i don't drink but my friends show me how awful can an aftermath of boozing can do.... superb, jack!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/20/2013 3:25:00 PM
A hangover can really be rotten (or so I've heard ...ha ha ! ) good luck in contest...love,Deb
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Date: 7/20/2013 2:47:00 PM
ok now talk about cutting it way short. haha. you silly guy!!!
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Date: 7/20/2013 1:31:00 PM
There is a song that says "There's got to be a morning after"..Well this sounds like it was a terrible one..Reads like it could be a winner..Good luck..Thanks for all the visits..Your comments are valuable to me..Sara
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Date: 7/20/2013 11:32:00 AM
Good luck in the contest! A hangover can be a very bad thing as you indicate in this work. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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