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Words To a Friend, I Lend

O- My friend- To you my heart begs To rectify all your wrong steps Let choose the right way your legs For which, let me give valuable tips A sure grave for all, time digs into which, every soul trips Know to love which helps Slow and steady develops Blow heart gets, if tongue slips Aim for gold, insult not silver Criticize never as it ever hurts To all kindness, if you deliver You can set right even perverts Assure love to those who shiver Love and calm are tools of experts. mvvenkataraman

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Date: 6/6/2023 11:52:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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