Get Your Premium Membership

Words Spoken By You- An Rl Collab

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Eileen Manassian.


Richard: Sometimes words speak louder than actions Is it possible that that could be true? Spoken hastily, without compassion Have such words been spoken by you? Eileen: Such words have been spoken by me making others dejected and blue Words that stole the sun from the skies But they've never been spoken by you Richard: Words can also be very uplifting Even if those gifted are just a few Removing sadness, comforting hearts Have such words been spoken to you? Eileen: Yes, such words have been spoken to me They’ve refreshed my soul like the dew My heart takes to wing and it flies Because of words spoken by you. And so our dear friends come and hear This message, you know it's quite true Words spoken can heal or can harm What words will be spoken by you? A Richard Lamoureux and Eileen Manassian Collaboration

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/21/2015 2:31:00 PM
I just saw this at richard's list. It's very cool how you responded to his words. Ideal entry for the contest!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2015 1:06:00 PM
Thanks Eileen for joining me! Hugs Rick.
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/20/2015 4:33:00 AM
Reminds me of Dancing Coins....and the other one we wrote a year or so ago...What was the name? I cry...or something? Anyway...I'm looking forward to more of these collabs. Hugs
Date: 12/19/2015 10:44:00 AM
Beautiful collaboration Eileen and Richard - we can all say things we regret in the heat of the moment and also things we say can be misinterpreted :-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/19/2015 11:14:00 AM
Yes, dear. It's true. I'm so glad Richard asked me to collab with him. He sent me his parts and I sort of added mine in to fit with his thoughts. Thanks for the visit. I'm trying to get as much as I can in today because next week will be MAD!! ;) Hugs

Book: Shattered Sighs