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Words, Vows and Squawks

A faint hearted silhouette, Of a life once thought, Surveyed the silent terrain Of a forest plot. Searching for creeds In the bones of deeds Her net came up empty Only whispers were caught. A canon of dreams, Battles of air, Toothless virtues, Knuckles gone bare. Damning a fight, Stood a farmer trembling, With fear he looked At a rabbit’s cold stare. A word adorned In glory diamond frill Longed for a text To shine upon its bill. Weaving in grammar, With vain notes of a stammer A loin cloth, a rag, A fettered letter’s Poisoned pill. An immodest figure Of hair-chested speech Watched over squawks Of birds on a beach. Steaming in smothers Of mosquito-like brothers A bellicose vein With nothing to leach Bled profusely For compassion to teach. A steely vow thunders At the grimace of night. Speechless candle sermons Brightens the light. Wondering if dead means Off with the head A guillotine’s guilt Came down from its height. A voice of timber Stood alone Upon earth’s stage, A guard with silent strength A worker of our age. Holding a wounded dove With flower power Tears of love A woman revealed How truth is concealed. Daring to design, At great risk of a fine, She wove a garment For our age: Eden’s dress in brutal rage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/12/2014 10:15:00 AM
I am surprised you don't have comments, your writing is very good. I'm glad I dropped by.
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Yorn Called
Date: 12/13/2014 5:41:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. I guess my stuff is a bit bizarre, perhaps off-key, too conceptual. Often what I submit here is far from finished and full of errors. My desktop is a mess however and I like to put my small efforts in a safe place:))
Date: 10/31/2014 3:53:00 AM
this is a great poem. well thought of written superbly. thanks for sharing this
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2014 10:17:00 AM
You could probably write it down word for word and call it your own like so many others you have stolen.

Book: Shattered Sighs