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Painting by Fumihiro Kato

The air was filled with sparks so bright; Ash and fire abound. The night was filled with fairy light; and deep the drumming sounds. Chorus And all about the wondrous night, in forms both large and small; walked spirits old and mighty souls to lend a charm to all. The sky o'er head was filled with stars; Haze filled fairy flight; The treetops raked the regal tarp; While didgeridoo's delight. And all about the wondrous night, in forms both large and small; walked spirits old and mighty souls to lend a charm to all. A circle formed of swaying hips; Brass bangles chimed the sound; The voices, deep and high and shrill; Bare feet stomped, the ground. And all about the wondrous night; Wide eyed I walked enthralled; As through the rents in astral space; I heard the lovers call. Sing a long! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zc6w1xSJfnY

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Date: 6/30/2015 6:23:00 PM
you so awesome DG, this is like warm music to my ears. I love the night. Who knows what it holds... LINDA
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Date: 6/28/2015 5:07:00 PM
Beautiful music to with this poem. A 7 for this wonderful poem and congratulations on your win. Hugs eve
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:20:00 AM
Debbie, Congrats on the fantasy win...... SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2015 3:25:00 PM
Great tale in words that flow soft and sweet. Congratulations on your top win, well deserved, Debbie.
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:03:00 PM
It was real Robert ;) it really happened to me ;) google Pennsic Wars Aleezabeta De Ravenna
Date: 6/27/2015 11:23:00 AM
Pretty good. congrats.
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Date: 6/27/2015 8:57:00 AM
Right where it belongs........on the top !!! :)
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Date: 6/27/2015 7:53:00 AM
ingenious take on the theme Debbie, well done and well deserved top spot.
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Date: 6/27/2015 7:19:00 AM
I can see why this piece gained top spot. Congratulations Debbie.
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Date: 3/30/2010 8:37:00 PM
Congrats for the win. fancy dream
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Date: 3/28/2010 11:02:00 PM
Full of enchantment and nice imagery. Congratulations on your winning this contest, Deborah. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:45:00 AM
Ahh...love it. A magic dream, of fairy land....I can hear the music!! Congratulations on a winning poem, Deborah!!
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Date: 3/28/2010 5:49:00 AM
A reality which seemed like a dream.....Pennsic War 30......Slippery Rock Penn.
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Date: 3/28/2010 3:28:00 AM
Amazingly vivid dream- Congrats Deborah
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:18:00 PM
Big congrats Ms. Debbie on your winning poem in the I Dreamed contest.. excellent write and win for u to strut your stuff as u walk to the winners circle.. thankxxx for that awesome blog comment .. luv the honesty and the laugh.. my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/27/2010 6:33:00 PM
This is a great poem. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 12/30/2008 8:42:00 AM
Debs , great lyrics to this old Irish air .... Well done also to the 2 young ladies on Youtube ...Hav'nt seen too many didgeroos over here . There are a few dodgerydonts on the prowl ( mostly politicians ) ....Keep well and keep writing well for 2009 ...
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Date: 12/28/2008 5:52:00 PM
If I knew the melody, I would be singing this one. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 12/26/2008 4:50:00 PM
Deborah this is so very original - Great job once again - God Bless, MJ
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