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Wonderful-2

Wonderful-2 Free verse acrostic W onderful is my life being here with you O nly you can make my heart rejoice N ascent feelings of love, move me to D esire you, be with you, to E mpty myself into you, to R emove all feelings of doubt and despair F orevermore wanting you, to guide me to U nexplored places and emotions L ighting my pathway and illuminating my life. John Derek Hamilton January 13,2015

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Date: 1/14/2016 9:55:00 AM
excellent acrostic John...lovely
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/14/2016 7:54:00 PM
Thanks just trying free verse it's kind of different for me
Date: 1/14/2016 7:20:00 AM
very nice....excellent.
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/14/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thanks not used to free verse yet!
Date: 1/14/2016 1:20:00 AM
Great n lovely John.. this new form is doing wonders.
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/14/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thanks Dr Upma

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