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Woman of Sorrow-Collab

Drink to her whose sorrow Has aroused a poet's sigh; A woman who brought tomorrow What treasure can never buy. Her words are penned with sadness And often an empty tone; Along with all those feelings In a sea of tears from feeling alone. Here's to her whose sorrow Has made many a poet cry; Her words are read with tears That rain like love from the sky. Now the sea will drink her tears With those we try to hide; Here's to her whose sorrow Flows free from deep down inside.
11-28-11 A beautiful collaboration with my friend Elizabeth Wesley Who intertwined her thoughts with mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/7/2012 12:33:00 PM
Beautiful...Love the lines "her words are read with tears that rain from the sky." Now the sea will drink her tears with those we try to hide." Well written. Thanks for reading my poetry and leaving comments. Much appreciated. Jodie Q
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Date: 12/16/2011 12:06:00 PM
Hello Dan, What you have penned here is such a part of who I am at this time in my life. It reads volumes of feelings. Love your words. As Always, Shar
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Dan Kearley
Date: 12/16/2011 12:41:00 PM
I am sorry to hear that...If there is anything I can do to change those feelings.Perhaps lending an ear.I am here :o)
Date: 12/2/2011 12:11:00 PM
I saw this over at Elizabeth's post. It's awesome!
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Dan Kearley
Date: 12/4/2011 7:52:00 PM
Thank you, so much for stopping here to let me know also. :o)
Date: 12/1/2011 11:02:00 AM
beautifully written. a wonderful collaboration
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Dan Kearley
Date: 12/1/2011 11:22:00 AM
Thank you very much :o)
Date: 11/30/2011 7:02:00 PM
You and Lizzie were in the mood for sure. Luv, Lizzy haha
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 7:33:00 PM
Indeed we were :o)~ Oh! you caught that hey? Hahaha Oopps!
Date: 11/29/2011 7:17:00 PM
just straight up a masterpiece, my friend,,nothing more to say....
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 11:16:00 AM
Thank you very much...
Date: 11/28/2011 7:14:00 PM
another nice and wondeful collaboration... you 2 are awesome,..p.d.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/29/2011 6:38:00 PM
Thank you.. :o)
Date: 11/28/2011 2:11:00 PM
Lovely to work together an excellent collaboration. :) Lizzie
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/29/2011 6:37:00 PM
Oopps! Lizzie :o)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/28/2011 4:13:00 PM
Thanks Lizzy.. :o)

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