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Wizard----What Did I Do

The spread is very nicely draped. Slipping into my new made bed, I pause to ponder how it’s shaped And where my fine top sheet has fled. I wonder what I’ve done to her. Why did she put fitted sheet on top And not the flat I much prefer? What did I do to make her swap? I give a muffled little moan As I’m foiled at every turn I take. I’m sleepy and tired right to the bone, But now I lie here wide awake. At last I am right on the edge Of falling asleep, but can’t deny That I must make a solemn pledge Her wounded feelings to pacify. I dwell upon my painful plight, Then give my pillow a good shake. If I can but get through the night, I’ll seek the answer when I wake. For Andrea’s contest I used draped, slipping, pause, edge muffled, foiled, wake, deny, dwell, pillow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/27/2011 7:49:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Joyce. Congrats on your win! Kim
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Date: 12/23/2011 11:19:00 AM
Very nice Write Joyce.Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/22/2011 8:11:00 AM
As usual, very nicely done Joyce. Congratulations
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Date: 12/22/2011 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Andrea's "Word Wizard's" challenge Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/22/2011 1:06:00 AM
this was a very light poem. And I enjoyed that after the many serious ones. I could just imagine the one spouse lying there feeling so uncomfortable about something that happened that day!!Cute. Congrats, Joyce.
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Date: 12/19/2011 5:32:00 AM
Lovely, Joyce, as always. I, umm, invite you to read my Merry Christmas poem. I dedicated it to you. You ARE a shining star here on Soup, and I've been horribly neglective in YELLING that out. Hugs!
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Date: 12/18/2011 7:42:00 AM
Thank you for sharing it Joyce I like it. OXOX Love from Norway and Anne-Lise Merry Christmas Joyce!
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Date: 12/18/2011 12:58:00 AM
You did a great job at poetically describing a bad case of insomnia.
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