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Done Without Emotion Andaree

When your thoughts are born,a lonely shadow sits, To decide battles your mind commits And place answers in motion, Without emotion, Empty, cold, Done. To unfold, Without commotion. This shadow drinks its potion. From a chalice where mind and soul splits When your thoughts are born, a lonely shadow sits. contest Andaree II 10/7/15

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Date: 10/21/2015 9:33:00 PM
Frederic, Wonderful win.................. SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2015 3:06:00 PM
many congrats on your win Frederic :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/17/2015 9:07:00 PM
this was so different, Frederick. It really makes me think! Well done. Thanks for entering this in my contest.
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Date: 10/7/2015 7:11:00 PM
Well done, Frederic. The content is deep and well-worded. Great job ... CayCay
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