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With Sand, Sea, and Sky

Picturesque displays Nature’s natural slideshow, Paintings in motion. * Paintings in motion That end with pastel sunsets, Kaleidoscope views. * Kaleidoscope views Nature’s study’s and subjects, With sand, sea, and sky.

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Date: 4/18/2009 12:18:00 PM
Tranquility as its best, nice job with your chokas.
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:52:00 PM
Nice title, you are great with these forms
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Date: 4/17/2009 9:54:00 AM
you have captured a beautiful view of nature and what it brings to life. great work!
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Date: 4/14/2009 6:48:00 PM
Nature provides much inspiration, Raul, and you capture its beauty so well in this poem. Love the way you describe "Paintings in motion," as nature is always growing, always moving. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/11/2009 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful use of imagery for a wonderful poem. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Happy Easter! Karen
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Date: 4/9/2009 6:24:00 PM
This one is wonderful, too.
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Date: 4/9/2009 1:57:00 AM
You paint such an obvious picture with your words and I think you have such a special talent. You are going places Raul, and I hope you stay in touch, Love Aleera
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Date: 4/8/2009 4:46:00 PM
wow! this absolutely fabulous Raul....really really beautiful....this is truly an amazing poem....I loved it!....great job.....always Maryam*
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Date: 4/8/2009 12:31:00 PM
Fascinating progression of thoughts and images here, Raul, on par with your usual exceptional output! You paint with bold brushstrokes, my friend! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/8/2009 7:38:00 AM
Very beautiful Raul.Will also look forward to your musical words.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words
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Date: 4/8/2009 6:36:00 AM
I feel like you must live by the sea and are constantly inspired (who wouldn't be!). If not, your love for it is evident by these amazing poems. Another awesome write. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/8/2009 5:10:00 AM
wonderful choka ... the outlook is brilliant! ~ Arany
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Date: 4/8/2009 4:54:00 AM
there is a painting hidden in these words well penned
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Date: 4/8/2009 4:07:00 AM
amazing choka, Raul, Jim
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Date: 4/7/2009 11:17:00 PM
Wow this is awesome... I like it
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