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With Jesus, No Mark of Cain

Out of my league, that's how you are Still my foolish heart saw you a par To your proposed love, I did not refrain I will be happier, once I fall in love again Far cry the laws, we tried and go beyond We're happy and giddy yet all gone wrong To people around, I've been a mark of Cain I will be happier, once I fall in love again I shared my time, my heart and my life.. But you, YOU rife all nothing but strife No words can explain the pain that reign I will be happier, once I fall in love again I am scared, so afraid to show all reasons Thus, I cling... cling tightly unto my Jesus With this, I sustained. New strength I gain I will be happier, once I fall in love again by Olive Eloisa 1:32 am April 04,2014 ________________________Thank You... Jesus.. :) Contest Name: HELPLESS, A KYRIELLE (WITH CO SPONSOR TIM RYERSON) Sponsor: Cyndi MacMillan 7th place.. to God be the greatest glory.. :)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/10/2014 4:10:00 PM

No Problem, Olive... I enjoy the contest list page...Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 9:58:00 AM

Olive, Congratulations, on your win in Cyndi's "HELPLESS, KYRIELLE CONTEST." take care -LINDA-

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:15:00 PM

Thank you so much LInda.. :) hugs tc too.. :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/8/2014 3:12:00 PM

Oh yes indeed...Thank you Jesus! Thank you for Olive Eloisa Guillermo and this wonderful and inspiring she has written. Bless her and keep her cradled in Your mighty and loving arms...Congratulations - Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/8/2014 6:17:00 PM

Thank you Tim ..:) I'm touched with your prayer and thoughtfulness.. God bless you too.. Thanks again..:)

Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/8/2014 3:15:00 PM

PS: You WILL love and BE loved again!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2014 9:53:00 PM

I love the refrain line you came up with for this one, Olive. What a unique kyrielle. congrats on your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/7/2014 4:04:00 AM

Thank you very much Andrea.. :) really appreciate your comments.. :) they are noted.. :) and kudos as well.. :D

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/5/2014 2:23:00 AM

Perfect Kyrielle with apt take on the theme, congrats on a fine win, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/7/2014 4:03:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Ram.. :) really appreciate it.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/4/2014 10:58:00 PM

Great work Olive ! rhymes so well wid my heart too ,, congrats on win dear !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/7/2014 4:01:00 AM

of thanks DR. Uma hope I did not pull so much.. :) GOd bless you.. :)

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 6/4/2014 6:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Olive. A sad write which shows a helplessness we all feel when love meets obstacles and a relationship which may have been, can NOT be. Time heals much. I am glad that your faith sustains you and brings you comfort. Cyndi

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/7/2014 4:00:00 AM

yes Cyndi for the faith I have.. :) yes it is. :) and never He did fail me.. :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/4/2014 4:02:00 PM

Congratulations, Olive, on this wonderful win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/7/2014 3:59:00 AM

Thank you Faye.. :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/20/2014 6:23:00 AM

It's those poems that we write in the weee hours of the night that are often the most heartfelt as we pour out our raw emotions in rhyme..Great to see you revealing your inner strength and reliance on our Lord Jesus. ")

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/20/2014 4:07:00 PM

I need to dear :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/24/2014 1:40:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi :) Very heartfelt.....the line "To people around, I had been a mark of cain" makes me realize what you are referring to. Stand up for yourself and be strong. Your faith will give you wings :) // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 6/4/2014 12:14:00 PM

...congratulations on your fine placing :))

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/18/2014 4:16:00 PM

each time i read this can't help the flashback and sometimes I'm overwhelmed of how I had been blessed.. :) and yesYES that faith keep me through...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/8/2014 4:17:00 AM

thanks so much Paul.. :) I did stand up :) and let them see who I am.. :)