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with death

with death 
i promise i'll be
yours faithfull
for eternity

my soul 
forever by 
your side
for i will not
be pried 

my spirit
my will
to be with thee
will never cease
to be
it's is 
a part of me

my love
my master
and my god
have bound
me to you 
this way

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  1. Date: 2/18/2010 4:18:00 PM
    I tell my husband of 26 years together the same thing and he groans with a laugh, love is eternal I do believe, especially God's love. Nice poem. Ellen

  1. Date: 2/14/2010 1:06:00 AM
    This is a great valentine poem, john, to give to someone special. About my car poem, if you wanna see this car, check it out at my first blog. It's with the few photos I was able to get up today with my nephew's help. And my car bears my name (license number Andie55)!

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 8:11:00 PM
    This is beautiful- and I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to you commenting!:) What a comment- and what a sweet person you meant to be. Hug...

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 3:21:00 PM
    This is a deep vow of love John, a very beautiful poem,indeed devoted and this lady you love is very lucky indeed..beautiful poem..Charma

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 1:17:00 PM
    This is a beautiful, spiritual write John. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 10:39:00 AM
    A lovely write to your faith John.. spiritual poetry is awe inspiring.. until the final curtain of breath.. then renewed... and forever alive.. thankxxx for your gracious comments on my poetry readings today.. Finale' is a classic poem for me.. has won many many contests on the contest circuit... appreciate your input.. have a lovely Sunday.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 9:26:00 AM

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 9:00:00 AM
    Great testiment of your character. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara