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with death i promise i'll be yours faithfull for eternity my soul forever by your side for i will not be pried away my spirit my will to be with thee will never cease to be it's is a part of me my love my master and my god have bound me to you this way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/18/2010 4:18:00 PM
I tell my husband of 26 years together the same thing and he groans with a laugh, love is eternal I do believe, especially God's love. Nice poem. Ellen
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Date: 2/14/2010 1:06:00 AM
This is a great valentine poem, john, to give to someone special. About my car poem, if you wanna see this car, check it out at my first blog. It's with the few photos I was able to get up today with my nephew's help. And my car bears my name (license number Andie55)!
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Date: 2/13/2010 8:11:00 PM
This is beautiful- and I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to you commenting!:) What a comment- and what a sweet person you meant to be. Hug...
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Date: 2/13/2010 3:21:00 PM
This is a deep vow of love John, a very beautiful poem,indeed devoted and this lady you love is very lucky indeed..beautiful poem..Charma
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Date: 2/13/2010 1:17:00 PM
This is a beautiful, spiritual write John. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/13/2010 10:39:00 AM
A lovely write to your faith John.. spiritual poetry is awe inspiring.. until the final curtain of breath.. then renewed... and forever alive.. thankxxx for your gracious comments on my poetry readings today.. Finale' is a classic poem for me.. has won many many contests on the contest circuit... appreciate your input.. have a lovely Sunday.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/13/2010 9:26:00 AM
I LIKED THE WAY .YOU VALUE YOUR PARTNER......IRMA
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Date: 2/13/2010 9:00:00 AM
Great testiment of your character. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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