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Wish We Could Be More Than Just-Friends

She's dancing in first place Watching her makes my heart race I love the way she sway Even bellerina would buy a ticket And watch her all day ! She's movin like a wind Oh girl! I cant help You've already put me in For her its love in the air, "His love" is the only thing she'ld care. Finally she found the love of her life Thankin me as if I was her love-story author "No dear !! Some r just born for each other" Sayin this... I left keeping my head high and feet on ground, A glass of wine is all I want with her face in background. The only thing I want to spell With a magic wand in my hand "Wish we would be more tha just friends"...

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Gary Bateman

Date: 6/16/2015 10:50:00 AM

Splendid Write here Kunal!! I agree with Pandita, the imagery is great and enhances your narrative very much!! Best Always, Gary

Kunal Rathod
Date: 6/17/2015 12:36:00 AM

Thanks a lot sir Your words are motivating

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/24/2014 9:21:00 AM

Excellent write - great imagery - I love it! Pandita

Kunal Rathod
Date: 8/25/2014 7:41:00 AM

Thanku pandita :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2014 2:45:00 AM

oh you have painted a delightful picture with this write - I do hope your dreams come true and you get to dance away with a wonderful lady:-) Hugs jan xxx

Kunal Rathod
Date: 8/24/2014 9:12:00 AM

THANX :-)