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Winter Wonderland

Snow falls like a bundle of feathers, Gently and lightly in silence. But when snow lands on bare skin, it feels as cold as stepping into a freezing shower. Icicles sparkle like diamonds above people's heads and when the wind blows, it sounds like birds whistling. Aunika Alch Age 11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/19/2013 1:37:00 PM
Aunika, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda
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Date: 5/18/2013 12:25:00 PM
Seeing winter through you senses is fun. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 5/11/2013 10:42:00 AM
Congrats on this win. l think I have read your poems so keep on writing you are doing a great job. love phyl
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Date: 4/28/2013 8:51:00 AM
Big Congrats on your win Aunika~A.O
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Date: 4/27/2013 5:39:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/26/2013 8:24:00 PM
Aunika,, congrats with your 7 wonder poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2013 7:11:00 PM
Excellent poem about the wonder of winter time, Aunika, enjoyed it, congratulations
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Date: 4/26/2013 1:32:00 PM
Lovely....congratulations
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Date: 4/23/2013 10:40:00 PM
Aunika, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 4/23/2013 9:56:00 PM
a very nice and beautiful cold imagery. Aunika, "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 4/23/2013 8:55:00 AM
A beautiful descriptive of a wonderland indeed. Well written. Welcome to P/Soup
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