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Winter-Spring Canon

Winter-spring canon Incensed along Jacob's Creek Like watery angels thought less from clouds above Canopies of light make soft their entrance In clucking-pig-progging-and-a-yip-yip-yipping A shuft-and-shushing of large glass doors Round about our ways of going Slipping on the wet pages of our Winter-spring canon

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/19/2010 11:04:00 AM

Congrats Matt on having your poem being featured this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. Love, always Adeleke

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2010 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Matt. Love, Carol

Janette Fisher

Date: 7/18/2010 6:55:00 AM

Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2010 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry x3 making it through the first round Matt. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Date: 5/31/2010 2:33:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with three poems. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Date: 4/16/2010 6:46:00 PM

What an interesting perspective. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/13/2010 6:46:00 PM

Congrats Matt, on your featured write. Vince

Janette Fisher

Date: 4/12/2010 11:52:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/12/2010 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Wish you more success in the future. Ernilando

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/12/2010 10:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Matt. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/12/2010 5:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2010 4:51:00 AM

Congrats Matt on your featured poem on Soup this week... a great choice to feature and share...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Sue Mason

Date: 1/26/2010 4:20:00 PM

Not sure I get the 5th line but I love the "shuft-and-shushing of large glass doors" ... smile ...I hear it ... Thank you so much for including me in your winners circle in the last contest you have ... And, I don't think I have the day/month of your birthday Mr. Caliri ... smile ... don't need the year but it would be nice to include you on my birthday calendar!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2010 9:04:00 AM

Interesting write that you have written here in this one. I especially like line three. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2010 4:42:00 AM

I say from the poetry I am reading this morning it seems it was an inspiring weekend for all. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Matt. Love, Carol

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/24/2010 11:42:00 AM

A beautiful write you have here and thank you for the short powerful read. Have a great Sunday. :)