Winter Fluff - Monoku 3

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Winter Fluff powdered sugar flows from the heavens and whips up marshmallow frosting Sandra M. Haight ~NA~ Contest: Battle of the Monoku or One-Line Poem #3 (old/new) Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Judged: 02/09/2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2016 6:46:00 PM

oh that second part was the perfect fluffy ending to it. So cute!!! And yummy

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2016 7:15:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thanks so much for the supportive comment! Hugs, Sandra

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/27/2016 9:09:00 AM

You paint a picture with words that bring your perceptions alive in the reader's mind, and we too can appreciate your world as you see it. Emile.

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2016 8:30:00 AM

Thank you, Emile. Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/27/2016 1:16:00 AM

I love this entry CayCay! I hope it does well. #7