Winter - the Japanese Haiku Style

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~Winter~ (Haiku suite) Winters approaching autumn mournfully whispers leaves on ground whither Squirrels run, stock food the trees starting to get bared weather gets more cold Snow will be falling kids will make snowmen, snowballs time to wear a coat. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010 November.15.2015

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Gary Bateman

Date: 11/15/2015 7:19:00 AM

Hello Dear One "D" -- A grand and beautiful Haiku Suite!! And you posted images on further enhance the meaning as well. A "7" and "FAV"!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/16/2015 10:38:00 PM

Hi there G!:))Thank you ever so kindly my dear friend Gary,for stopping by again and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I'm so glad you liked this winter Haiku of mine here.I truly appreciate so much, your very kind visit,the 7, and the fav, and of course the very wonderful comments that you always honor me with.You're always very kind, G.I'm glad you like the graphics I chose for this one too.They take a long time to select and add them to each poem that I post,alot of work, but to me all worthwhile:) Well, I hope that all is well with you guys.Sending my love and prayers to you and Ingrid as always.Take very good care of each other now! :))Thanks again for everything, G!Best to you always!And keep the ink flowing! Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you!:)D.

Nudershada Cabanes

Date: 11/15/2015 6:25:00 AM

Beautiful strings of Haiku Dorian. I can see winter coming. ~ Nudershada

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2015 4:41:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Nudershada,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, n' comments.Yes, winter is almost upon us now:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D.

Lin Lane

Date: 11/15/2015 3:29:00 AM

Very nice Haiku, Dorian.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2015 4:39:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Lin,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, n' comments.Glad you liked this one:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D.