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Winning Pancake - Didactic Contest

You want her love through her desire, Her love of food Is too your good Get the mIx right Flour is your welcoming arms Eggs the desire in your voice Milk the kisses you bestow by choice Make a perfect batter Make a homely place with your arms Slowly add the kisses one by one Followed by loving whispers enjoy them Mix it well Add flowers to her bed Hold her hand show her the way Fold her close to you yes she will stay Getting warm Her body is ready For whatever filling you choose You are both hungry, with nothing to lose Which filling are you Are you the sweet kind All goodness and light Or the savoury filling that lasts all night. Remember not to burn Don't over cook Trying too hard on a hot heat Slowly cooked makes it more of a treat Your hooked So successfully done Your filling was first class She is yours, no one can surpass. Penned 9 Sept 2015.

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Date: 9/10/2015 10:08:00 PM
ahhhh, nice and sweet one on pancakes!! I wonder why the contest asks didactic. I still am not sure I know what that means!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/11/2015 1:54:00 AM
well Andrea i read about it and tried to follow the rules, I still don't know if I am correct .....Seren
Date: 9/10/2015 2:37:00 AM
What a beauty u penned here Seren! Gl in contest!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/11/2015 1:54:00 AM
Thanks Dr Upma, wasnt sure what i was doing....Seren

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