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Wind Music

Listen now, the autumn wind is playing
Betwixt the trees the branches swaying
Serenading summer as she packs her things
A joyful yet melancholy song she sings

Her instruments the bush, the grass the leaf
Each one a soloist though their passages brief
She sends the acorn dancing to the ground
And weaves a tapestry of golden sound

Soon she will contemplate the rain and snow
More intense round the corners she will blow
Sweeping the walk and banging the gate
With winter time she has confirmed a date

So much of nature's music can be found
With the changing beauty of wind blown sound

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick

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  1. Date: 11/1/2013 5:32:00 PM
    Barbara, very beautiful song of nature in this poem. I sent soup mail about the contest.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 8:23:00 PM
    enjoyed the sonnet in the wind poem................ LUV.............. SKAT

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 4:56:00 AM
    I like the metaphoric language of this one..It has great flow, rhythm, and rhyme..Way to go, Barbara..Congrats..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick
    Date: 9/30/2013 4:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Great personification also..Sara
  1. Date: 9/29/2013 7:02:00 PM
    this one is brilliant...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 5:30:00 PM
    I love this Barbara......there is a playful and fun aspect to this lovely sonnet! Well done!! Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 12:37:00 PM
    Outstanding piece! Congrats!

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 8:34:00 AM
    Loved your nature themed sonnet.congratulations!

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 3:09:00 PM
    I loved that you used "Betwixt" (lovely word). Lovely poem; good job! :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 9:58:00 PM
    nice poem about the wind...Linda

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 3:27:00 PM
    I have never enjoyed the thought of winter so much, as I did reading your poem. Very nice! Thank you for stopping by... I haven't heard from you in a while? Hope your doing well. :o)