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Wildflowers - Visual 7

Love, like wildflowers, once bloomed on that bench beneath the old oak tree But love's promise faded with time as a flower in winter Passionate hearts blossom 'neath azure skies as love returns in springtime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/15/2015 10:42:00 PM
Joseph, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT
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Date: 2/10/2015 3:56:00 PM
Love's approach to the contest added a litle flavor.. Enjoyed reading your winning work today..Congrats ..Sara
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Date: 2/10/2015 12:45:00 AM
This is lovely Joseph! Congratulations on your win. I am used to haiku and found the sijo a real challenge.
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Date: 2/8/2015 2:41:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/8/2015 10:54:00 AM
One of my favorites..I would have given it a much higher spot. Congrats.BArbara
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Date: 2/8/2015 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on you HM.
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Date: 2/8/2015 1:22:00 AM
Joseph, this is very pretty. Wish you had reduced your syllable count in last line. other than that, you did a fine job depicting that scene with sijo.
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Date: 2/1/2015 7:25:00 PM
excellent verse and entry good luck my friend. Light & Love
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Date: 1/30/2015 12:39:00 PM
- Beautiful ! - // I wish you best of luck in contest .... and a lovely weekend Joseph - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/30/2015 12:31:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery Joseph:-) Hugs Jan a 7 from me:-)
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Date: 1/30/2015 12:31:00 PM
very lovely poem
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