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Wildflower Filled Sinkhole-

wildflower filled sinkhole- honey bees buzzing. November 28, 2014 Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: ONE Broken Monoku - Poetry Contest Sponsor Rick Parise

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2014 4:42:00 PM

Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2014 8:57:00 AM

DANE, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~

John Lawless

Date: 12/28/2014 8:27:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann. A beautiful tribute to nature's desire for beauty.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/28/2014 8:02:00 AM

Congratultions Dane Ann, and all the best for the New Year xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2014 9:10:00 PM

Now that is one sweet picture!!! Congrats, Dane Ann

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/27/2014 9:05:00 PM

Congrats on the win Ann...huggs

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/27/2014 6:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2014 5:46:00 PM

Back to say many congrats on your win Dane Ann:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/28/2014 11:35:00 AM

A beautiful image, Dane Ann! I remember you had a sinkhole on your property a while back. I'm guessing this monuku means all is well? Lovely monuku...best wishes if for the contest. Hugs, Rhonda

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/30/2014 7:33:00 AM

Yes, we still have a very large and growing sinkhole. We also have started a couple of bee hives. I threw some wild flower seeds into the sink hole last fall and a few crotalaria, which bees love this time of year, I had also dropped some dead fern frons and speared down a large rosebush clipping with root tone on it. Will do the same this fall...hoping to have the bees busily buzzing .

David Meade

Date: 11/28/2014 10:14:00 AM

very clever -- where the bees are buzzing there is life!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/30/2014 7:36:00 AM

Exactly right, David! Big Smiles.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/28/2014 7:14:00 AM

beautifully penned Dane Ann good luck! Hugs Jan xxx

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/30/2014 7:35:00 AM

Thank you. I was so happy to place 3rd along with the other winners. It wasn't easy to keep the meter right. Now if I could only improve the humor. I have only written one funny limerick...ever! LOL