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Wild Waves - Haikuette

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Wild Waves - Haikuette

roaring of tubular waves
curling lip of white froth
sea's power

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  1. Date: 7/10/2013 8:25:00 AM
    such moving waves. congrats.

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 7/10/2013 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ellie for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. How are you doing? I hope well. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 6:08:00 AM
    congrats on your win Connie

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/15/2013 7:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Joseph thank you for the congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:56:00 PM
    Folks often do this with a haiku, make 3 separate thoughts, in 3 lines, I hope you have now shown them it is called a haikuette LOL YOU did it RIGHT! Congrad's on your win. Light & love

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/15/2013 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Debbie thank you for the congrats and the lovely comment. it means a lot. I was not sure if I had done this Haikuette correctly. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:47:00 PM
    YOur "curling lip" is terrific. congrats to you. BG

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/15/2013 7:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Barb for the congratulatory comment. much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 5:03:00 PM
    wow...I love the description "curling lip of white froth" !!! That line is perfect !! Congratulations, Connie!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/11/2013 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carrie for your congratulatory comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 10:42:00 PM
    oh boy, that wannabe contest. Dang,I have not even studied it out yet. I sure hope you got it right coz it looks pretty cool.

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 5:37:00 PM
    hmm, what means Haikuette? Is it supposed to be different from haiku? Anyway, this is a good description of those kinds of waves, Connie!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/4/2013 12:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A Haikuette is a 3 line poem. Each line must be a separate entity,yet contribute to the whole-17 syllables or less (no specific number of syllables per line). No verbs, unrhymed an use a title. This is the meaning conveyed in the 'Wannabe' contest. I'm not sure if my poem is correct. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/3/2013 2:19:00 PM
    a standout all the way... enjoyed the natural appeal of this 'ku..:) hugggs

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/3/2013 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your great comment Nette. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/3/2013 3:59:00 AM
    The description using so few words lets me feel the power of the ocean..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/3/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sara thank you for the great comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Connie, you describe the sea so well, always beautiful to touch the ocean with words such as these, thank you for sharing this xxx

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/3/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Mystic thank you for the great comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles. Connie
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 5:19:00 PM
    This Haikuette will do awesomely well for Debbie's contest! I believe she will really enjoy this as much as I did! I loved reading this illustrious poem this evening! What a remarkable piece, such a grand poem here Connie! Great Work!!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/3/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Russell thank you for the great comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie