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One sunny day, we went to see wild flowers, We followed mother because we were just kittens; It was so beautiful, we forgot the hours, We were playful kittens with feet like mittens. We followed mother because we were just kittens, The field was full of wild flowers- pretty; We were playful kittens with feet like mittens, Out from the tangled growth would pop a kitty. The field was full of wild flowers- pretty; Fluttering- came a group of blue butterflies; Out from the tangled growth would pop a kitty, Happiness - flowers, butterflies and blue skies. Fluttering- came a group of blue butterflies, Sweet, grew pink and blue flowers and purple weeds; Happiness- flowers, butterflies and blue skies, Us, kittens chased those butterflies at great speeds. Sweet, grew pink and blue flowers and purple weeds, It was so beautiful, we forgot about hours; Us, kittens chased those butterflies at great speeds, One sunny day, we went to see wild flowers. ________________________ February 17, 2016 Poetry/Pantoum/Personification/Wild Flowers- Kittens and Butterflies Copyright Protected, ID 16-758-573-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Personification Pantoum, Kittens and Butterflies, sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 3/20/2016 11:56:00 PM
Broken, CONGRATS on your awesome "Kitten & Butterfly win." Love Linda
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Date: 3/21/2016 1:18:00 PM
Linda, thanks for the congrats and the awesome and love !
Date: 3/20/2016 10:09:00 PM
I could see you penning a great one for your two cuddly, cuddly kittens. I enjoyed the chase, BW. Congrats on the win!
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Date: 3/21/2016 2:17:00 PM
Timothy, thanks for the nice comment and the congrats !
Date: 3/20/2016 9:20:00 AM
Wonderful! ... Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/20/2016 9:48:00 AM
Bobby, thanks for the wonderful and the hugs !
Date: 3/19/2016 9:48:00 PM
Re-visited to say wonderful BW.
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:50:00 PM
James, thanks for the wonderful !
Date: 3/19/2016 8:06:00 PM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. So gentle and beautiful are the words that you place before us in this excellent write. What joy and peace your words do give this reader. A dream that sings into the heart Constance. This is so deserving of a seven rating and it goes into my faves....MIKE.
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:19:00 PM
Mike, thanks for visiting with the nice comment, the excellent, the 7 and the fav !
Date: 3/19/2016 5:56:00 PM
Congrats !!! ( ( ( ) ) ) Sara
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:30:00 PM
Sara, thanks for visiting with the congrats !
Date: 3/19/2016 4:15:00 PM
this is absolutely delightful Constance :-) :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:33:00 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting and the nice comment and congrats !
Date: 3/19/2016 4:02:00 PM
Broken Wings, a lovely poem, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:37:00 PM
Laura, thanks for visiting my poem with the lovely and the congrats !
Date: 3/19/2016 3:46:00 PM
Constance, thank you for introducing me to a new form that I truly have been enjoying. Thank you for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:44:00 PM
Eve, thanks for loving my poem, I am over the moon happy with my placement !
Date: 2/17/2016 1:15:00 PM
Sweet and beautiful are your words in this delightful, difficult form!
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:46:00 PM
Thomas, thanks for visiting with the sweet, beautiful and delightful, I have many of these Pantoums lately !
Date: 2/17/2016 11:23:00 AM
I have not tried a Pantoum, BW. Don't know if I'm up to it. Yours is beautiful.
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:46:00 PM
James, it is not that bad, just of it as putting a puzzle together...

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