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Wide Awake -A Hero's Departure

Wide Awake (A Hero's Departure) I awoke from a dream, a childlike slumber Perfectly still, as to not let the vision slip Within the eyes of a child, a hero was born Safe, soft, a beautiful gift But in moments of deepest despair, No hero remained, or had existed at all (it would seem) Promises of love fall flat behind the facades, the fear of fears, the listless gleam From the heart of a woman, a hero was torn Beautiful eyes, wide awake Hope of hopes, forlorn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/30/2016 12:19:00 PM
Lisa,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 5/29/2016 3:50:00 AM
Lisa, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/28/2016 11:49:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Lisa. :)
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Lisa Wood
Date: 5/28/2016 11:53:00 PM
Thank you! This definitely comes from a place of heartache. It was therapeutic, to say the least!:)

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