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Why Rain On Me - Why Contest

Why do the clouds roll by The very land thats cracked and dry Why cant God see the need Nothing can grow not one little seed Why do  the clouds break over flooded earth Rain and more rain causing death To humans and animals alike Doesn't make  sense to cause such  strife Weather is a touchy thing To figure out where the sun should shine The rain to fall, its uses unfurled Food to grow to feed the world Flowers to water to bring  a smile To the old and the infirm,who cant walk awhile So busy clouds try to fathom out your goal Rain so important a commodity for all Why do I make this simple plea Cos I am sick of the rain falling on me. 2 June 2013

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Date: 6/5/2013 11:09:00 AM
lovely Seren gl in contest and may you get sunshine Shadow x
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/5/2013 6:42:00 PM
Hooray we have sunshine, but no luck in this contest, thanks for your wishes anyway...Seren
Date: 6/2/2013 5:29:00 AM
Ha ha, such a plea it is my friend! I truly loved reading this exciting write this morning! What a delightful way to approach this contest! I have written a poem for this contest too but I haven't posted it yet, I'm making sure that it's all good before I do! Mine is about space, and the questions about it all! Your poem is fabulous and a wonderful piece to write! Such a grand poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/2/2013 8:48:00 PM
thanks Russell looking forward to reading yours....Seren
Date: 6/2/2013 4:47:00 AM
You word it well Seren. Well done and Good luck. AO
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/2/2013 8:47:00 PM
Thanks AO ...Seren

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