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Why Hast Thou Forgotten...

Children of Adam... why hast thou forgotten reverential love besoughten ? Upright ye walk, but now downtrodden foresaken art thou due allotted... Material pleasures hamper thee render thee,I so implore, explore,absorb this natural splendor temporary vanities beauty, ...memories acclaimed adore, trees doth beareth fruit aplenty water floweth wholesome freely honey sweetened colors bloom silken lustre natures loom.... What must be done dear children of Adam, why hast thou forgotten ?

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Farah Chamma

Date: 3/27/2009 1:19:00 PM

That's a beautiful piece that delves in the heart's emotions...Yes...Why have we forgotten? Beauty lies just before our eyes..yet many choose to look at what has no significance...Beautilfu write... Farah

Louise Nelson

Date: 3/27/2009 11:11:00 AM

what we have forgotten is that all we have we owe to the Lord and if it had not been for Him we would not even be. very deep and thought provoking piece. always a pleasure to read your work.love,louise nelson

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/16/2009 4:05:00 PM

For there is a darkness in everyone yet when the light shines upon, it is no longer dark and we ove on to another lesson, that's life.... Children of Adam; excellent write!

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/16/2009 4:03:00 PM

Hey Jay, you know, reading this (I may have a different perspective than you intended) but I get the overall feeling of mistakes made, how we all are not without sin, yet we see another that displays the ugly~ right away, society scorn... because it is easier than looking at self to realize there is a connection in some way, I believe, common threads tie every one on earth together and WOW, the possibilities huh? And my dear, close friend, I have found a beauty even in the darkness, Cont~

Arany P.

Date: 3/16/2009 10:34:00 AM

an important message written well! ~ Arany

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/15/2009 5:49:00 PM

Never. I have not forgotten the true state of less is more. we adhere to that universal law here. :) Well said, love, Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/15/2009 1:05:00 PM

Jaybird - so great to see you posting! We do seem to have forgotten, haven't we. An important message here my friend in a beautiful, uplifting, inspiring poem. Love ya Jay, Gnocchi xoxo