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Why Did You Hide It

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Why Did You Hide It

So many emotions
locked up inside,
no where to run,
my feelings I hide.

I try to cry,
the tears won't
I sit here still,
my body is numb.

My mind always
to your hospital
and the only image I
is you lifeless,

That image still
haunts me
both day and at
Although you looked
I couldn't bear the

For in that moment, 
my world stopped.
My heart was in my
my stomach dropped.

I grabbed your hand
and held on tight.
I bowed my head,
knowing you lost the

I never saw it
no not this quick.
Why didn't you tell
that you were so

Why did you hide it?
Why didn't you let
us know?
We could have fought
this together,
before we had to let
you go...

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  1. Date: 10/27/2013 4:15:00 PM
    Very descriptive, yet easy to read and understand. You also have some appropriate rhyming here.