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Who will show me love? The kind that doesn't give up. The kind that lasts when things get rough. The kind that's felt with every touch. Who will show me what love is for; pick my dreams up from the floor; give me wings and watch me soar; love me for less but still love me more. Who will catch me when I fall; build me up so I feel tall; help me break down my own walls; give their best and their all. Who will love me at my worst; make it clear that I'm their first; move in forward and not reverse; show me how much my love is worth. Who will wake up next to me; share a night filled with ecstasy; never have regrets to me; know exactly what it is that gets to me. Who will show me a life filled with laughter; bring me the love that I've sought after; sing my praises to the rafters; start with me a whole new chapter. Who will hold me when I'm sad; show me good when I see bad; calm me down when I get mad; be the rock I never had. Who will chase away all my fears; use their shoulders to catch my tears; want me close and need me near; replace my sorrow with their cheer. Who will be there when things go wrong; be left standing when the rest have gone; sing to me a soothing song; build with me a lasting bond. Who will want me when I'm kicked aside; say sweet words to boost my pride; never run and never hide; through whatever will stay by my side. Who will give me hope and watch it grow; be the love I've never known; pull my heart out from the stone. So who will love me when she won't?

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Date: 3/3/2011 9:25:00 PM
I enjoyed this. Very nicely written
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Date: 4/16/2010 12:27:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... very creative write..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:51:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Paul. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2010 10:56:00 PM
I enjoyed the narrative
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