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Who Is Knocking On My Door, Now

Let me tell you a story about my Christmas, past, present and future. (All nice, yes sad, but no naughty in sight) ____________________ It was midnight when I turned off the Christmas lights, Me and my cats had snuggled in bed, all cozy; Then there was a knock in the middle of the night. A knock on my door and there was a girl quite lovely, The pain reflected in her eyes was soul shattering; Me and my cats had snuggled in bed. All cozy. She told me she was my Christmas past weeping, We held each other remembering all the past sorrow; The pain reflected in her eyes was soul-shattering. She left saying there would be other knocks to follow, I answered and it was a young woman, who was me; We held each other, remembering, all the past sorrow. She was beautiful but her soul was a dreadful broken plea, Old the woman who came next, but with a soul at peace; I answered the knock- and it was a young woman, who was me. She was beautiful, but her soul was a dreadful broken-plea, Me and my cats, had snuggled in bed, all cozy; Old, the woman, who came next, but with a soul at peace, Then, there was a knock- in the middle of the night. ___________________________ Who is knocking on my door, now? Could that be death! (Well, I am not answering) _______________________________ December 16, 2015 Terzanelle For the contest, Who Is Knocking On My Door Sponsor, Tammy Reams First Place

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Date: 1/8/2016 11:55:00 PM
Nice win. LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 4:33:00 PM
Thank you Linda
Date: 1/6/2016 2:50:00 AM
Congrats for opening the year with a top placement BW! ;-)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 3:16:00 AM
Teddy thanks so much for the congrats ~
Date: 1/4/2016 4:28:00 PM
A beautiful piece.. congratulation on your WIN
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Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 4:42:00 PM
Lewis, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations ~
Date: 1/4/2016 10:00:00 AM
Broken, Congrats on your "Who is Knocking at my Door? WIN... Luv **SKAT**
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Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 1:00:00 PM
Thank you Skat
Date: 1/3/2016 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, very good poem Very well thought of and written xx
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Date: 1/3/2016 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, very good poem Very well thought of and written xx
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:29:00 AM
Very nice
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Constance La France
Date: 1/3/2016 12:01:00 PM
Pashang, thank for visiting and for the nice ~
Date: 1/3/2016 9:51:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem, BW, so well-written and so very touching. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 1/3/2016 12:02:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the wonderful, the congratulations and the hugs ~
Date: 1/2/2016 10:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win--good job with this form Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 1/3/2016 1:21:00 AM
Janice, thank you so much for the congratulations !
Date: 12/19/2015 11:42:00 PM
Constance, you always make my soul weep and make me wish I could do something to heal you. Love, my dear....
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Constance La France
Date: 12/25/2015 7:29:00 AM
Balveen, your compassion is beautiful, will I ever be healed, this is doubtful, I will take my sorrow to the grave ~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/20/2015 12:29:00 AM
Hugs for a lifetime....
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Constance La France
Date: 12/19/2015 11:49:00 PM
Oh Balveen, I sure could use a hug, thanks so much for being my poetry friend ~
Date: 12/17/2015 8:48:00 AM
A very touching write Broken Wings - another form I must try:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2015 9:37:00 AM
Jan, thank you for your visit and comment, so appreciated ~
Date: 12/16/2015 3:23:00 PM
This piece really touches you deeply BK, Very well written indeed!!! Good luck in the competition Best Wishes Kevin
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Constance La France
Date: 12/17/2015 9:38:00 AM
Kevin, thank you so much for visiting my poem, and for the compliment and support, appreciated ~
Date: 12/16/2015 12:41:00 PM
Beautiful , intelligent poem great write as always my dear...
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Constance La France
Date: 12/16/2015 12:59:00 PM
Dalia thank you for the visit

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