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Who you are I may seem strong but it is all pretend- I love you Kind, Witty, Passionate, Scared of the hurt, Subtly emotive, Pretending to be strong, With a longing to be loved, Melody that rhymes to her tunes, Patient, you wait for her to confess, Are an adorable loving husband ! Written Sept 26th, 2015 For Richard's contest "Who do you think I am" Inspired by the poem "I love you" Awarded 7th place win

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Date: 9/29/2015 12:08:00 PM
Lovely, my dear Dr Upma....sweet tribute to Richard. Congrats
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:56:00 PM
Dr Upma, congrats on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/29/2015 1:45:00 AM
Appreciate your kind visit n wishes dear Skat!
Date: 9/28/2015 10:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Sharma.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/29/2015 1:45:00 AM
Appreciate your kind visit n wishes Michael!Thnx for a continued support to my poetry!
Date: 9/28/2015 6:10:00 PM
Unique,enjoyed.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/29/2015 1:43:00 AM
Appreciate your kind visit n wishes Shirley!
Date: 9/28/2015 5:57:00 PM
Great tribute and inspiration. I see Richard saying you were on the list. BIG congrats!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/29/2015 1:43:00 AM
Appreciate your kind visit n wishes Andrea!
Date: 9/28/2015 6:02:00 AM
You are very kind Upma. I would have rated this one higher except I wasn't sure what was meant by "I am seem strong"?
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/29/2015 1:41:00 AM
Oh Richard I am so sorry that I typed that line taken from your poem wrong... my fav line - I may seem strong.....
Date: 9/26/2015 8:19:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your etheree - I guess that first line is from one of Richard's poems. Good luck in the contest, you definitely have a contender. Well done ... CayCay
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/29/2015 1:42:00 AM
Appreciate your kind visit n wishes!
Date: 9/26/2015 6:40:00 AM
Upma, very nice for the contest, best of luck and thanks for visiting my poem, father ...
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/29/2015 1:42:00 AM
Appreciate your kind visit n wishes!

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