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White Man Came, Took Everything

They sailed from ports From Europe's past To Ancient Civilisations How long would they last Genoa, Santander To name just two Galleons, traders Who helped who Distant lands So far from their home Indigenous tribes Whose kings they'd dethrone Aztec and Inca Civilisations iconic Along came the white man Chronic Pillaged for riches To send back home To fat bellied monarchs Whose throne's groaned Indigenous culture Stripped from their land Preached new culture Forced to understand Great civilisations Of this planets past With wanton greed Would never last Civilisations modern Whose next on the list New Guinea tribes White mans twist To look back At the carnage thrust White mans greed Was their only must For all the lands Who felt their sting White man came, took everything " Inspired by Midnight Oil "

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Verlena S. Walker

Date: 6/7/2014 9:14:00 PM

This is well done James. What does the future holds? Enjoyed... Verlena

James Fraser
Date: 6/8/2014 10:35:00 AM

Thank you Verlena, James :)

Lord R. E. Taylor

Date: 6/2/2009 3:09:00 PM

It is way to bad that so many cultures were destroyed by expansionism. Beautiful write

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/2/2009 11:40:00 AM

Wow...you're very inspirational, James. This is holds much truth and wisdom; you are a Prince of tributes and tales. It is a generous act to give something back to the clans and tribes, you do so with reverence and respect. A sad and searching piece. Best to you and yours....Mikki

Christy Hardy

Date: 5/30/2009 5:59:00 PM

I have Cherokee in my blood line, and I have heard so many stories of how things were. It breaks my heart to know this sort of horror actually happened...My Great Aunt still tells of the stories passed down.....this is an awesome write....always, Christy

Kristy De La Keur Scoville

Date: 5/30/2009 5:18:00 PM

nicely done and though it is sad that this is our history.......

James Fraser

Date: 5/30/2009 4:52:00 AM

There is no slur on the modern white race, this poem highlights a nation/s, who went to explore new worlds, and once there because of the mentality of the time decided whats yours is mine, this mentality still survives to this day. As Europe was the most civilized continent at the time? The ethnic majority were white, if they were another color, i would probably have the same concern by them, but i enjoyed your comment. i have yet to write about the Aborigines and the UK's shame>James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/30/2009 4:16:00 AM

James, The poem is great! But, being white, I feel hurt a LOT when I'm placed in the same category as the Conquistadors just because I am "white." Diversity comes from character, not skin color.Sometimes hatred comes in a blanket package. We are the here and now. Not greedy criminal exploring expansionist haters. History tells that many men were freed from prision to sail the dangerous seas. Well, evil men did evil things. Today, evil men do evil things. That's not love. Lovingly, Dane

James Fraser
Date: 6/1/2014 3:12:00 PM

'White man Came Took Everything'

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 5/30/2009 3:53:00 AM

Love this sort of write that teaches a part of history within its words, and usually with lesson to be learned too...Well done, effectively written...Anna-marie.

Christy Hardy

Date: 5/29/2009 6:22:00 PM

Life is still much this way....sad....always, Christy

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/29/2009 4:19:00 PM

Very good write James! It's sad the way this all went down. Nate

Anna Andersen

Date: 5/29/2009 2:42:00 PM

thank you.. colors was fun. my teacher in 11th grade said i would never be able to write a "good"poem using just colors.-she had nothing to say after she read it :). oh. mom and dad was an extra credit thing for English in 9th grade. and enough about me. i like the new one u put up. u r a very good writer