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Come, my sweet, to a far off forest frosty, Take my hand and I will get all gusty; Or I can be shy and gentle and slow, The wind whispers on my window. Come, my ethereal enchanting girl, Let me take you for a nighttime whirl; Come, my sweet before dawn's shadow, The wind whispers on my window. Let me lift you lovingly up high, I am just the swirling air in the sky; Do you see the streams down below, The wind whispers on my window. We will wander through weeping trees, Whistling and twisting, making a breeze; Hold my hand over this green meadow, The wind whispers on my window. All night we will soar until you awaken, Then you will forget about our journey taken; In the dawn, but a breath will be my tempo, The wind whispers on my window. _________________________ March 20, 2016 Poetry/Kyreille/Personification/Whispering - Wind Element Copyright Protected, ID 16-770-253-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Element, Part 2, Wind sponsor, Brian Davey Third Place

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Date: 4/3/2016 11:12:00 AM
Congrats B.O. for the amazing poem to win. Love. Anisha D
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Date: 4/3/2016 4:21:00 PM
Anisha thanks for the congrats and amazing and love !
Date: 3/31/2016 2:07:00 AM
I agree with Timothy! Absolutely enchanting! Congrats Constance!
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Date: 3/31/2016 8:34:00 AM
Balveen, thanks so much for visiting my poem and the the congrats and enchanting, I love that word ~
Date: 3/30/2016 6:20:00 PM
It's like a fantasy-esque storybook take on the wind. I liked this idea of the wind that is warm and welcoming, rather than harsh and abrasive. Congrats on your win, BW!
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Date: 3/31/2016 9:21:00 AM
Tim, thanks for the congratulations~
Date: 3/30/2016 1:41:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, Congratulations on your contest win with this enchanting work of personification and alliteration. Great refrain too. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/30/2016 3:15:00 PM
Brian, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment!
Date: 3/30/2016 1:01:00 AM
Wonderful poetry n win Broken.. big congrats!
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Date: 3/30/2016 7:32:00 AM
Upma, thanks for visiting with the wonderful !
Date: 3/29/2016 4:44:00 PM
whispering well done - congrat
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Date: 3/29/2016 6:45:00 PM
Dave, thanks for visiting with the well done and congrats !
Date: 3/29/2016 12:51:00 PM
BW, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/29/2016 1:44:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats and the smiles !
Date: 3/29/2016 12:42:00 PM
Lovely, Broken Wings! Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'wind' contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/29/2016 2:06:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the congratulations, the 7 and the hugs !
Date: 3/29/2016 4:12:00 AM
I love the way you formatted your story in BW, and what a great story it is! Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/29/2016 2:16:00 PM
Brian, thanks for a wonderful contest and for my awesome placement, I enjoyed writing this poem so much and I am so honored !
Date: 3/21/2016 1:13:00 PM
Lovely, dear Constance! Have not been around in a while due to my regrouping. Again, a wonderful write!
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Date: 3/21/2016 1:42:00 PM
Thomas, thanks for the lovely and the wonderful, appreciate !
Date: 3/21/2016 12:36:00 PM
So romantic Constance!!! Magical write dear friend!!!
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Date: 3/21/2016 1:52:00 PM
Anand, thanks for visiting my poem, I love that word magical !
Date: 3/21/2016 6:31:00 AM
oh woooow...magnificent! 7.
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Date: 3/21/2016 2:30:00 PM
Sarah, thanks for the magnificent, I like that word and the 7 !
Date: 3/21/2016 1:58:00 AM
This is Excellent Constance! I am looking at a winner. Thank you for my placement in your second chance contest my friend. Cheers, Connie ; )
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Date: 3/21/2016 2:34:00 PM
Connie, thanks for the excellent and the compliment, so appreciated and thanks for supporting my contest and congratulations to you on your placement !
Date: 3/20/2016 11:58:00 PM
You captured my attention on the first line and I could not let go! :) A7
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Date: 3/21/2016 2:38:00 PM
Arthur, thanks for visiting with the nice compliment and the 7 ~
Date: 3/20/2016 8:53:00 PM
So so beautiful dear Constance.
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Date: 3/21/2016 2:42:00 PM
Charmaine, thanks for the beautiful !
Date: 3/20/2016 6:27:00 PM
Your kyrielle is inspiring! The wind is silent, invisible and there when it "whispers!" You've quite a way with "words" Broken Wing! Quite a way! :-) May I humbly say 7!
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Date: 3/21/2016 3:01:00 PM
Walter, thanks for visiting with the compliment and the 7 !

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