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It’s time to lounge and contemplate, Allowing the crap to all hang out. While full bowels disintegrate The gas attacks, having to shout. Relief is done gradually And Cabernet eases the day, Oh this wine, I tell you truly Entices with its fine bouquet. But the thing I hate most of all, In a restroom away from home… After cheese, hands reach for the wall, Yet…there is nothing there but chrome! Paper roll is gone, long been flushed, My whining drains... my seat untouched! Here’s My Whine, Now Pass The Cheese Philip Garcia’s Contest 8/08/2016

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Date: 8/15/2016 11:57:00 AM
Hi Nette, I loved this! Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/15/2016 6:52:00 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats for your placement in the contest, with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 8/15/2016 6:41:00 AM
lol! So funny Nette! Congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 8/15/2016 2:03:00 AM
this was great! I loved the form and the flow. An excellent sonnet to be proud of. I truly appreciated reading it. Thanks for the submittal
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Date: 8/8/2016 11:40:00 AM
ROFL! In sonnet form, I love this; it's like a comedy sketch with a visual so ' graphic.' Winner!
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Date: 8/8/2016 10:56:00 AM
You had me laughing at the photo, and you had me in tears laughing after the poem! Hilarious!
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Date: 8/8/2016 10:31:00 AM
So goofy and insanely enjoyable poem. This reminds me of a few stopovers while on road trips! Funny bone gets the prize!
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Date: 8/8/2016 10:31:00 AM
Oh this is so good nette,
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Date: 8/8/2016 9:31:00 AM
Lol, this is funny Nette…good luck in the contest!:)
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:31:00 AM
Oh my, this is hilarious! This should be a winner! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:19:00 AM
Very funny, Nette. It's great to see your humorous side. I do not do public toilets! nor buffets! Good luck in contest. This should do well.
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