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Where the Wind Blows

The Waxing Moon and the Wind The winter wind tears at the throat of night like a fair weather friend. Once, breeze born seeds had nourished the ripe soil of summer's joining, alliances of water, wind, earth and fire which formed from heart source, now ravaged by competition. Howls of blood lust wreak havoc on the weakening darkness, the pack hunts, reveling in the hoar frost and the sharp hump of gibbous moon in the eastern sky. Each rattle of shutter brings hope to the onslaught of gale searching to claim the lead and lead… to find a chink in the human armor of hearth, home and family. Yet, though the wind has might, the heart fire burns bright and in this warm light true friendship can be born, for there is no beauty in the gnashing of teeth and rending of nascent flesh. May the wind mellow and once again carry the seeds of Spring, new life, new art, and upon the rack of Godly hart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/7/2013 9:51:00 AM
a nice win...PD
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Date: 6/4/2013 2:38:00 PM
I never can understand why poems like yours, are not at the top where they belong. Beautiful !!
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Date: 6/4/2013 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie, I really loved this poem, I loved how you were wishing to all of us best wishes with the wind. Beautiful. Terry
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie, on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest " Free Verse For Winter". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/19/2011 10:17:00 AM
congrats on this excellent winning poem, what an opening line!
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Date: 2/19/2011 12:11:00 AM
I was impressed with this piece after the first time I read it. Congratulations on winning in the contest.
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Date: 2/18/2011 11:34:00 PM
awesome Debbie, congrats on this winner in the contest, one feels the chill when reading this.May the wind mellow, and once again carry your pen majestically to these pages. Harry
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:55:00 PM
What a fantastic take on this theme. many congrats for this win dear friend.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:34:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Chris, deborah.
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:28:00 PM
Congrats on your big win in this great contest...BG
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Date: 2/18/2011 1:47:00 PM
Hi Debbie :) haha I should've bet and won ;) Super duper congrats on the 2nd place win ^_^ This powerful one was so vivid for me-- super yay to you & this coconuttie (haha) is so happy to share the place with you :)
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:58:00 PM
Congratuations on your well deserving 2nd Place win in the contest, Deb! Enjoy your win! Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/18/2011 11:10:00 AM
This poem has a story between the lines....I am thrilled to see it a winner!!!! May summer bring out some warmer friendly faces!! xoxox
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:17:00 AM
Deb, Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest with this wonderful free verse. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:13:00 AM
ravishing, lights! APPLAUSE for the high win with this portrait of realism/ impressionism strokes..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:44:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in the Winter Free Verse contest luv.. enjoy another top spot ..top notch piece...
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Date: 2/16/2011 10:54:00 PM
Thanks again for my HM and ^_^, always always happy to be of any help, Debbie :)
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Date: 2/15/2011 2:06:00 PM
OMG Debbiethis was just fantastic gonna add to my favs.Thanks for the wonderful HM on my poem in your contest it was easy for me to write this one cause it's the truth.~LUV~Teresa
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:52:00 AM
Okies Nikko going to check out wreck/wreak I bet you're right! ;)
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Date: 2/14/2011 2:38:00 AM
This is very profound Debbie, and I sure do hope I got what you mean here (or at least an itty bitty part) -- you incorporate such amazing imagery here that gives an impact to the reader-- and yes, may that "heart fire" always stay lit despite that strong wind-- very unique & powerful take on Chris' challenge, I bet this is among his winners -- btw ok I hope I am not wrong here, but me thinks you mean "wreak havoc"? if I am, please accept my humble apologies :)
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Date: 2/12/2011 11:27:00 AM
why do you have to tear me to pieces with such super diction and visuals that twirl with the wonder of wintwr?? a most fine freestyle piece that will surely bag a high position, debs!! thanls for appreciating my special work for you in your free verse contest!! i'm in cloud 9!! love and huggs ti you.:) nette
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Date: 2/12/2011 11:01:00 AM
I'm not angered in anyway! You remain a great moma & friend. Thanks for the blog comment anyways & thanks for sharing this great piece with us 2day. Have a great week ahead. Love always. Adeleke
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Date: 2/12/2011 9:47:00 AM
Deb,....wow....powerful stuff, I especially liked "gnashing/nascent" "armor of hearth home and family" and "sharp hump of gibbous moon"....this is my kind of poem and like it very much................P.S. thanks for the suggestion about the awkward footnote in ECLIPSE OF SUN, which I have immediately fixed...best wishes...Syd
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Date: 2/11/2011 11:17:00 PM
I'm not a prodigal son!
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