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Where the Heart Beats

Where The Heart Beats ________________________________(Started)_______by: Nathan Dilts Thump budda thump thump Thump budda thump thump Can you feel it beating Faster Always faster Shaped just like an aster The mitosis of an emotion Where the notion of its motion Travels up through my spine Wraps around my mind Thump budda budda thump thump Thump budda budda thump thump Can you feel it flowing Like a diamond That is glowing Never knowing Where it’s going Always showing What it’s growing _________________________________(Finish)_________by: P.D. Thump thump thump thump thumper Thump thump thump thump thumper Can you feel it changing Rapidly emerging Losing its curve Tightening the nerve Energy reload Waves about to explode Accepting the negative Rejecting the positive Thump budda thump Thump budda thump Can you feel it fading Melting away Pulsing its rays Relaxing base Freezing phase Boiling down Drumming sound Thump Budda thump Can you feel it dying Losing its shine Dim neon lite Weak to krypton nite Lost of resistance Fading existence Moments are bleeding Wakening to his feeding Thump--- bud..dha ----thuu..mp Can you feel it dropping My heart is stopping My inside are not rotating My body is the axis My heart, I'm its universe Faintly a flash in my chest Trying to beat again Crying for a chance Slower pounding slower Thum p___thuuu_____________ Stop Beating Can not feel it the beating is gone

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Date: 11/25/2013 8:33:00 AM
Linda You created a wonderful and unique write. I can feel your heart going through all the emotions and hear it beating and breaking from verse to verse. Nice job my friend Hugs
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Date: 9/7/2013 6:04:00 PM
Well this is different ;} thank you for reading My Midnight Sun,,,,, which I did not know was featured ;} I wish there was a way I knew which ones I've read ;}
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Date: 8/17/2013 6:32:00 PM
How's your heart doing now my Sweet Dark Friend? How many times do I need to ask? lol Take care, Richard
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Date: 11/17/2012 6:14:00 AM
Your poems are all unique my greatest poet, friend and sis! Hand salute and two thumbs up and all gestures for great admiration here! Thanks for the extreme joy tonight while reading this. take care always! love always, Leonora
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Date: 9/10/2012 4:57:00 PM
Loss of resistance, fading existance moments are bleeding, (awakening) to his feeding. Awsome stanza. sorry about the correction i pointed out. We think a little alike.. Thanks for the read; I like going further back.. TC
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Date: 8/9/2012 10:11:00 PM
My penal gland recently blossomed,my heart chakra subsequently went wild - this passionate composition expresses alot of what I went through,happily,excitedly - although my heart didn't stop this tyme - I thank Deity for your talent - J.A.B.
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:27:00 PM
Yes, PD. He is hard to read!! I never know who he will choose or if I will get on his list. you and he do think a lot alike so it's easy to see why he picked yours. Congrats again.
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Date: 8/4/2012 10:08:00 PM
so what are the things you used to do that you are ignoring now? My daughter in law smokes and it's irritating because she has the new baby. Even smoking during the pregnancy. But the baby seems healthy, thank heavens and I do love my daughter in law. She and Jeremy are moving FINALLY to Oregon together. she just got custody of her two kids finally and can leave Utah.
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Date: 6/29/2012 11:10:00 PM
Great collabo..love the roller coaster ride..the flow was beautiful as well...real smooth.
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Date: 6/15/2012 9:04:00 PM
THATS IT I AM CONVINCED YOUR A POETIC GENIUS!!!
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Date: 4/15/2012 4:17:00 PM
Thank you again for taking time out of your day and writing such a beautiful Happy Birthday just for me. Love u hun!!! xoxo
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Date: 12/1/2011 5:02:00 AM
* "Good Morning, My Dear Sweet Beautiful Linda * Thought I Would Journey Through Your Precious Beauties Poetry * Found This, Jewel of Paradise * As I Have Said * Your Beautiful & Gifted Brush Paints A Wide Spectrum of Splendid & Fascinating Hues * This Beauty Touched My Heart Deeply * My Luv To Your Beauty, Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 9/21/2010 1:57:00 PM
The cardiac poet ... and a superhero imagination, pure gift and creativity flowing here.
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Date: 7/30/2010 6:30:00 AM
sounds a bit like like a reqium funeral song. bring the flowers and pump the power
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Date: 7/28/2010 8:31:00 PM
Great rhythm and flow. Nice read.
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Date: 6/25/2010 4:51:00 AM
A wonderful co-write, PD.. in my opinion, this is one of your best poems..it has a philosophic touch.. Kisses, Emily
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Date: 6/21/2010 4:09:00 PM
your heart must be the magma within its world.now this poem is burning with emotion. they sound like lyrics.(: i hope your days is a slam Ms.Sid.. & just in case you are interested, i have been writing an enigma, its a very special one, its been taking me a while to write it though.& i believe it will be the last one that i am able to write. take care, now i am on to the next one. ~Always&Forever Lynn
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Date: 6/20/2010 11:56:00 PM
Very inventive poetry PD.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/20/2010 4:48:00 AM
Great wordplay poet...so entertaining...^_^ v
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Date: 6/20/2010 12:43:00 AM
Hello P.D - what a super co-write you have here, I love how you developed the theme started by Nathan. You did a great job in speeding up and then slowing down the read in time to the beat of that heart - great stuff. Thanks for your comments on Rudolph btw ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/19/2010 8:05:00 PM
Very expressive and real. Thanks for your comments on my poems
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Date: 6/19/2010 10:03:00 AM
My heart is still beating could feel all of that sarah x
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:00:00 AM
i love this one :) and nice finish i love how you said everything i could almost feel it how the heart stop beating and went slower
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Date: 6/18/2010 7:39:00 PM
Nice wording and thump thumping. Thanks for your reading of my latest. My you are fast. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2010 9:32:00 AM
Beating, flowing, changing, fading, dying and dropping. What a brilliant poem you have created taking us on the journey of life and its different stages which all relates and response as per the changing mood of heart beats. Great write my friend and again a new creative approach. And many thanks for your most valued comments on Patradoot 22. Love and best wishes always......Ravindra......Poet D
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