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Where Pleasure Exceeds

Peaceful, quiet in the cool outdoor space The moon spots a visit, bringing some grace The darkness is illumined by the moon Enough to make a couple start to swoon Path is lit up, an eerie glowing hue Allowing the couple something to do Something that’s not allowed in Christian eyes By their gushing hearts they did not disguise The moon showing them just what they should do The shade of the night is a dark, dark blue Path leads into the darkness, nothing’s there But their eyes are surely looking elsewhere Their heart beats within the deep moonlit night Where pleasure exceeds all desires tonight
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/3/2013 6:23:00 AM
Excellent....cannot fathom , you know all forms of poetry.....wow....thanks for posting....
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Date: 2/26/2013 6:48:00 PM
So lovely and romantic !! ooooo's and ahhhh's here !!! Great write my friend !!
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Date: 2/26/2013 2:18:00 PM
Very romantic and dreamy
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Date: 2/26/2013 11:08:00 AM
Very romantic with beautiful scenery and lovely expressions inspiring love and affection. Enjoyed it!
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Date: 2/26/2013 9:50:00 AM
Very expressive of romance..Sonnets of love's expression..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2013 6:21:00 AM
Russell, a beautifully romantic poem, full of the kind of love each person needs and wants, wonderful, constance
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