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Where Is the Light - Team Work Contest Poem 2

Where is the light that lived within, Why has the flame of doubt appeared. The trees bend slightly in the wind Towards darkness, now have you veered. Focus on the things dear to you, Where is the light that lived within. Your day will come before it's through, You that have, not died, with sin. Deep in your soul, you seek therein The pleasures, that should not have been. Where is the light that lived within. Questions of how this came and when How long have you abandoned life What have you done, where have you been, Will you choose to remain in strife Where is the light, that lived within. Penned on 26/08/2013 using Form : Quatern by Seren Roberts and Wayland Bunch Contest : Team Work

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Date: 8/28/2013 4:09:00 PM
You have brought so much for us to view within your glorious write, an extra special poem here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fantastic piece this evening! What a brilliant poem, quite the magnificent verse! Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/28/2013 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Russell, glad you enjoyed it ....Seren
Date: 8/28/2013 3:53:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem about life and light surrounding it.So much to ponder here.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/28/2013 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine, for stopping and commenting...Seren

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