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When you said goodbye, my eyes felt hot

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When you said goodbye, my eyes felt hot

When you said goodbye, my eyes felt hot...... Those school days, cannot be forgotten our ways We were just kids in our kinder garden school Studying and playing together as innocent kids You made me laugh and helped me in many ways So, I felt someone there for me as a close friend Days have gone and we have grown as teenagers then my heart turned and felt love on you But I don't know where to begin my love story on you Anyhow, I wanted to tell you what was in my mind Then I had come to know you had someone I cried a silent tears because I could not help myself I missed you because I did not propose my love on time I will never forget our school days Those days when you were everything to me But now I realized that it was nothing but a dream When you said goodbye my eyes felt hot and my tears oozed from my heart. But that's life and I have to accept it Our good memories will be not erased from our hearts Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka Copyright @2006 Ravi Sathasivam

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  1. Date: 7/3/2012 5:41:00 AM
    this is really nice, Ravi and it makes me feel sad for you. I know the feeling. I think it's a poem many can relate to!

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 5:50:00 AM
    Ravi, a sigh of the heart - a tear on my cheek - - - moving written poem - - - very well written - - - oxox love Anne-Lise

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    Date: 6/30/2012 7:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comment Anne Appreciated.