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When You Left!

Why you let me to fall in your love If you knew that one day you will leave me You didn't knew that you will take my spring with you when you left, you made my heart lonesome You left big pain on my heart Your memory is stay with me I still remember of you Your remembrance is giving live to my life You're so sweet in my memorial Life is nice and pretty with you When you leave! What happen to me? Love is playing his play with me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/18/2016 11:17:00 AM
ZHINO, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/5/2015 7:43:00 PM
Zhino, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:08:00 AM
Oh the pain of loves separation. I think most of us has been through it at some time. I hope you found another. God Bless. Dave.
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Date: 6/9/2009 8:10:00 AM
Ryhming stanza.
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