When the Blue Jay Sings- a Collab With Jt Honestly

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He: (JT Honestly) May our nature be one voice When creation is at rest May you on that night rejoice When I hold your supple breast So come fly away with me For a night to finally Be free in ecstasy When I make the blue jay sing She: (Eileen) Yes, the blue jay sings As your lying here with me Nothing but this moment now Nowhere else I’d rather be All the world is hushed and still As you hold me through the night Making sure I know I’m loved All the way to morning light!! A Second Collaboration between JT Honestly and Eileen Manassian Our first collaboration was entitled Mental Tattoo

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2015 8:39:00 AM

I enjoyed rereading your collaboration Eileen. I hope you are enjoying your Sunday, hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2015 9:12:00 AM

Yes....just finished a meal with the family.....have you posted a new poem???

David Meade

Date: 3/5/2015 1:25:00 PM

What? Only one soupmail to complete the collaboration!! That is impressive -- What a delightful, delicious, divine, demonstrative love -- how you two make the Blue Jay sing!! 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2015 10:54:00 PM

Hello, David. Yes...that's the honest truth. He sent me his stanza. I sent him my stanza. In the same mail I asked if he wanted to do more, and if not....to post it. He felt it was done...and the rest is history. Our first collab is the same. Two stanzas...short and sweet....a lovely treat. Mental Tattoo..I'll share the link if you like. Thanks for the lovely post. Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 3/5/2015 1:15:00 PM

Very romantic! In my mind I can see this in a rustic pastoral setting. Well done to both of you Eileen...Honestly:) // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2015 10:59:00 PM

Ah...what you cute ending to your post, Paul...You play with words so sweetly. Thanks for dropping by. Always good to see you! At least here there is no nephew to get worried.... ;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/5/2015 10:08:00 AM

This piece has a serene feel to it. Well done the both of you.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2015 10:12:00 AM

We have collabed before. One soup mail to each person and the piece was done. I'm glad you liked this romantic sensual piece.