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When My Voice Is Silent, I Write

When My Voice is Silent, Final I write because I have thoughts, bottled up inside of me, My mind wrestling with the yesterdays of my destiny! What, when, where, why and how, are questions undefined, Like optical illusions, with vivid colors and shapes divine. When, opportunity affords me, the time to just be real. I play the videos of my life and recite, “Peace please be still.” In the early morn as the sun rises, and at the dawn of day, I listen to music and dance about, as the chirping birds play. This gives me inspiration and often times relaxes my mind, But I must admit on occasion, a glass of red wine works fine. Written: © 3/27/16 Submitted for: Old or New Poem 10 Lime Max Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Rick Parise

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Date: 10/5/2016 4:34:00 PM
In only ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 10/5/2016 4:50:00 PM
Many thanks Sara :>!
Date: 10/3/2016 2:41:00 AM
loved this Sarita :) congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 10/3/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you very much, Luloo!
Date: 3/27/2016 2:40:00 PM
I learned alot from this exercise. I see yours was quite a bit different also. I enjoyed reading you today. Peace my friend:)
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 3/27/2016 6:04:00 PM
Yes Daniel, this one was a bit of a challenge, my thoughts were all over the place. I can only hope that it meets the criteria. Thanks for the visit and I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

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