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WWYD Let us wield the hammer soften it with truth drive the nails into the box imprison them with brimstone blocks. Fear of God and parlor tricks, no straw inside the crumbling bricks to support the mitres weight. Hollow tubes of echoed past dulling in the chambers vast empty and flamboyant flash. Reach beyond the puppet stage allow belief to come of age. The message hasn’t changed - just men who will not let Him come again To sit upon a rumpled throne and walk as He did – all alone - in love’s repeating prayerful dawn. 12/5/2014 for Regina Riddle – Didactic Poetry Contest “He that believes in me, the works that I do shall he so also, and greater works than these shall he do…”

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Date: 12/9/2014 9:00:00 AM
Great work John! Congrats on ur winning awesome write my friend!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:12:00 PM
Thanks again Dr Sharma
Date: 12/8/2014 9:27:00 PM
Congrats, John, on a wonderful win with this inspiring poem! Hugs, Rhonda
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:12:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda for your continued support and comments.
Date: 12/8/2014 8:25:00 PM
Quite inspirational write, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/8/2014 1:21:00 PM
I read your winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:10:00 AM
This is an excellent write congratulations on your win!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Maurice
Date: 12/8/2014 10:18:00 AM
I would have placed this much higher than mine ! Love this inspired piece, well done, John !
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Carrie for your kind words. Your comments are always appreciated
Date: 12/8/2014 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for entering. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 12/8/2014 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win John.
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Date: 12/8/2014 7:55:00 AM
very thought provoking - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:15:00 PM
Thank you again Jan for you support and input.
Date: 12/8/2014 2:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this fine poem.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Rob
Date: 12/5/2014 11:00:00 AM
This is an awesome didactic, John! It's thought provoking but not too preachy...I hope I'm making sense. Well done!! Hugs, Rhonda
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