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What lingers

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What lingers

I’d like to be what lingers
while you sleep:
the smell of jasmine

and the drops of rain
that cling
to trembling leaves.

I’d like to stay with you,
when you are far away
on private journeys.

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  1. Date: 12/4/2008 7:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 11/29/2008 8:39:00 PM
    Jan - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 10:22:00 AM
    Thank you, both, Jan

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 4:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/11/2008 7:56:00 AM
    Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar