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love is when you stay by the side of your lover wen he is in ail love is when you don't allow him to stay pale love is when you make him hale love is when you care for him more than your manicured nail love is when you don't let him stay dull love is when you stay loyal and never gull love is when you protect him from evil rays and keep him safe is you heart's protective case. its when you don't hesitate to take a first pace..its when you help him to come first in life's difficult race. love is something which can never be described..it is a disease for which no medicine can be prescribed.

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Date: 3/14/2016 5:10:00 PM
Garvita, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Garvita Gour
Date: 3/14/2016 5:45:00 PM
Btw hello dear.. I m garvita.. M 17 yrs old.. M in 12std humanities student.. Giving my boards right now! An aspiring lawyer... M from India.. And I would love to be friends with you...
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Garvita Gour
Date: 3/14/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thankyou so much.. Your comment means alot to me.. Well I am just a normal girl who loves writing... Writing gives me peace.. Its my passion.. I know thre is 1 thing common between all of us is that we all share the same love for poems.. I would request you to guide me in this field.. I am just 17 now... I have to learn alot from all of you.. I am new here and I will definitely like it if you'll help and support me.. This is one of my best day.. And m so glad tht I joined poetry soup... M looking forward to it.. Once again thankyou so much for this heart warming welcome... I appreciate this..
Date: 3/14/2016 12:25:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Garvita :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Garvita Gour
Date: 3/14/2016 5:47:00 PM
I am already feeling so familiar over here.. You guys have made me feel as if I m a part of your family since long.. Thnkyou so much.. *hugs* nw m also a part of your family.. Please keep guiding me.. I would need suggestions! Even you are like my elder sister :)
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Garvita Gour
Date: 3/14/2016 5:24:00 PM
Thankyou so much.. It means alot to me... Your suggestions are always welcome dear new friend.. I would love to hear review from you.. I write for my happiness and I wud definitely like to improve myslf.. And I'll soon read your poems too so that it inspires me.. Thankyou once again.. For this sweet gesture
Date: 3/14/2016 11:31:00 AM
Garvita Gour, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Garvita Gour
Date: 3/14/2016 5:42:00 PM
Your suggestions are alwyz welcome dear.. Be My friend throughout this journey... I would love to be friends with such amazing and sweet ppl... Ps- Haha finally I've been able to post this comment into 3parts Haha.. Anyways m eagerly waiting for your reply :) *xoxo*
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Garvita Gour
Date: 3/14/2016 5:39:00 PM
Hey skat.. This is garvita.. I am 17 yrs old.. M in 12th std humanities student and m frm India.. M an aspiring lawyer.. But I always wishes to become a writer..but I can't go against my dad.. He wants me to become a lawyer but he never stopped me from writing.. He have always encouraged me but he wanted me to choose law as a career.. Anyways.. Thats all about me.. I am a stupid silly teenager.. I write what I feel... I write for my happiness cuz it gives me peace.. Thankyou so much for this heartwarming welcome.. It means alot to me.. I've been welcomed so sweetly... I already feel that I am your family member... I am looking forward to make new friends here.. Please keep guiding me.. I would definitely need your help... I would like it if you that me as your Lil sister.. Thankyou for your offering me your friendship... You all are so inspiring.. I am new here but soon I'll be reading all of your poems..
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Garvita Gour
Date: 3/14/2016 5:38:00 PM
Hey skat.. Thankyou so much.. I don't know why I've not been able to post a long comment.. Do you use any other social networking app? Then lemme knw I wud love to be friends with you

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