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What Do You Need, To Be Noticed

Am i just A convenience to you? I try and try to make you visualise the potential me and you have deep inside. I sometimes wish that I pass your mind, so I dont feel so stupid for always having you cross mine. I wonder why your eyes are so blind you only see the beauty which will soon begin to die. You dont see my beauty within, you only see my scars, and smile which hides the truth of A love-sick heart being ripped apart becoming love warned out and thrown out. Do I need to have killer thighs with a perfect sense to accessorise, or beautiful eyes with a seductive style just to be noticed by you that once in a while? Well sorry I dont wear gold or diamond chains, or even play these love sick games. Im not everything or anything but will always continue to shine because I will forever hold my head up high. I am noticed now, for my question is mirrored back at you. What do You need, To be noticed? - Wiko Te Maru

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Date: 3/2/2024 10:14:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/5/2016 4:28:00 PM
WIKO, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV -- LINDA--
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Date: 3/15/2011 4:12:00 PM
very nice. welcome to poetry soup
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