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what am I

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what am I

What am I

I am perfect
A flower of an old age
Have dew on my petals
making me look vintage
I have a slight perfume
some of my family has none
The world of lovers always has room
for me when a delivery comes

My first is in dog when an intruder is about
My second is an “a “ this is a free one from  me
My third is in bread the sort a hot dog is in
My fourth is the name of my family

Put them together and you have


Barkarole Rose, a lovely red rose long stemmed perfect for cutting and in an arrangement.


21/02/2013


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  1. Date: 3/19/2013 9:10:00 AM
    Love the end in particular when you put the clues together to form your name! - Johnny

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/19/2013 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Johnny ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 3:18:00 PM
    What a wonderful write, very clever indeed my friend! I enjoyed reading this poem this afternoon! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/25/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol thx ...Seren