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What Am I

What am I I am perfect A flower of an old age Have dew on my petals making me look vintage I have a slight perfume some of my family has none The world of lovers always has room for me when a delivery comes My first is in dog when an intruder is about My second is an “a “ this is a free one from me My third is in bread the sort a hot dog is in My fourth is the name of my family Put them together and you have Barkarole Rose, a lovely red rose long stemmed perfect for cutting and in an arrangement. 21/02/2013

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Date: 3/19/2013 9:10:00 AM
Love the end in particular when you put the clues together to form your name! - Johnny
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/19/2013 11:19:00 AM
thank you Johnny ....Seren
Date: 2/21/2013 3:18:00 PM
What a wonderful write, very clever indeed my friend! I enjoyed reading this poem this afternoon! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/25/2013 5:33:00 PM
lol thx ...Seren

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