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Welcome, Carol

Welcome, Carol

So glad to meet you Carol Brown
Please grab a coffee and come sit down

Being new to Poetry Soup, you have made me feel so welcome
Your genuine comments and inspiring creativity make me feel at home

Oh look at that table, there’s Rick and Debbie
And over in the corner are John and Catie

Our host, Michael, is off in the distance
In a deep discussion with our rambling poet, Constance

Every seat is taken all around Carolyn 
With Francine, Deb, Rick, and Joyce all having fun

By:  Shani Fassbender
For the contest:  First Words Over Coffee

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  1. Date: 4/9/2011 1:59:00 PM
    Thanks everyone...sorry Dana, wish we would've been allowed more than five couplets so I could have included everyone ;-)

  1. Date: 4/9/2011 11:58:00 AM
    Wonderful read this afternoon. Looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn. P.S you forgot me :P

  1. Date: 4/6/2011 5:23:00 AM
    My heart you fill with joy Shani thank you. I love how you wrote this up for the contest. The mention of so many wonderful poets in your poem is marvelous. Wouldn't this be grand to see and meet so many of our poetry friends at the same place at the same time? You did an exceptional job of writing this poem and I wish you the best in the contest and always. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/5/2011 10:00:00 PM
    Cool how you incorporated other names into the poem. Carol is a lovely person you chose! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/5/2011 6:47:00 PM
    A wonderful entry for the contest. I enjoyed the read. Best of luck. Caryl