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Weather Forecast, Rain

The drumming of rain and tapping of raindrops Booming thunder, swishing, splashing of cars Cleansing of the city, the distant rolling Power and anger of a rain storm Weather forecast, rain Wet foliage, the call of birds chirping melodies The hum and constant dripping of the storm Candlelight within my dwelling, flickering The dripping, dripping, dripping Weather forecast, rain The hush of fading raindrops, the gentleness Peacefulness and tranquility within me Hypnotizing rain, rain, rain falling The sweet smell of the city Weather forecast, rain The calmness envelopes my soul and mind A purring, soft cat sleeps on my lap Steaming cup of chocolate cafe Stillness of rain, beautiful Weather forecast, rain Written September 8, 2012 For the contest, Weather Forecast Sponsored by, Joy Wellington

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  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:49:00 AM
    Constance, congrats on your win with this lovely poem. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 11:05:00 PM
    very inventive, having it always rain but showing the GREAT side of the rain at the end. REally nice one, Constance, Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 8:08:00 PM
    This was one of the outlines that caught my attention as well. I particularly love the contrast of the first verse against the last. Even though it was still raining there was a peacefulness that radiates tranquility. Lovely. congrats on this big win. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:18:00 PM
    Congrats on your great winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 8:09:00 AM
    CONSTANCE, congratulations with your awesome "Weather Forecast" poem in Joy's contest... have yourself a good day :-) Love PD

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 6:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Constance. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:57:00 AM
    Belated congratulations once again, I am sorry these are late I am busy packing and shopping for my holidays xx

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Joy's "Weather Forecast" contest Constance. Love Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 3:41:00 AM
    Oh, I really love your entry Constance. It is just the way I feel about rain. Beautiful imagery in your verses. Congratulations on your wonderful win!

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 10:48:00 PM
    Joy is certain to be enthralled by this exciting forecast so vividly expressed with superlative adjectives and imagery Constance .. much luv and success ..

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:21:00 PM
    yes, as Russell says, this is absolutely beautiful. Hope you are feeling much better - is the dreaded work rearing its ugly head yet? Hugs from us both x

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 11:18:00 AM
    Talking about beautiful, this write is surly one of the most beautiful poems that I have read of yours Constance...and you have some spectacular ones! What an extraordinary piece here my friend, I am truly amazed with this write, the Weather forecast is RAIN here too! I really enjoyed the line, "The sweet smell of the city" I can smell that right now...though I don't live in the city, I do have friends that do, and it does have a certain scent to it! But so does the country...another poem maybe!

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 10:15:00 AM
    great write Constance..have a nice sleep! good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 10:07:00 AM
    peaceful and relaxing poem appropriate for this rainy day in good old Toronto. thank you for sharing vie