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We Were One

Standing in a meadow of imagination Guided, by a celestial destination Along the dale Follow the trail To a regatta, of fireflies with luminous sails The heavy night air, stills an apprising gaze As lights set the meadow ablaze Yellow green With a lunar sheen A breezy wave, to a star studded scene Bathed in the beauty of a blushing moon Crickets fiddle, night birds sing, frogs croon A cacophony Nature's symphony The sound of heaven, orchestrated brilliantly An owl takes flight to a pied-a-terre Watches, with his wide eyed stare Feeling the love From God above I am inspired, by the awesomeness of For a moment in time we were one What was, what is and what's to come pied-a-terre: secondary shelter an original poem by Daniel Turner

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:46:00 AM
Daniel, Congrats on your win in Mystic's contest. *LINDA*
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Date: 4/26/2016 12:05:00 PM
Love this line: Follow the trail To a regatta, of fireflies with luminous sails Congratulations on your win :) !
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Date: 4/25/2016 11:38:00 AM
Congrats Daniel to win the top place on wonderful Answer. Best wishes. Anbisha D
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Date: 4/25/2016 6:23:00 AM
Congrats Daniel, for your WIN with this fine piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/22/2016 4:57:00 AM
Congratulations...
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Date: 4/22/2016 4:56:00 AM
Well deserved top podium.. awesome poetry here Daniel..
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Date: 4/21/2016 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations DT. Hope you're on the mend...
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Date: 4/21/2016 11:12:00 AM
Daniel, I am back to congratulate your on your fine First Place win in the 'answer' contest. Well done! Sandra
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Date: 4/8/2016 7:56:00 AM
This is such a wonderful response poem, Daniel. Love the way your words flow and your imagery is so lovely. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/8/2016 8:02:00 AM
Thank you Ms Sandra. You are so kind. I really appreciate your support. Peace and have a wonderful weekend:):)
Date: 4/7/2016 12:15:00 AM
What a fantastic write Daniel! It's amazing how the quality of your inspiration can dictate the quality of a write. Wonderfully complimentary and a fun challenge for the both of you, I'm sure. Good luck Daniel!
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Date: 4/7/2016 7:47:00 AM
Hello Jeannie! It's for a contest. I'm not even sure if I have done what was asked of me. I appreciate your kindness and friendly visit. Peace my dear friend:)
Date: 4/6/2016 9:45:00 PM
A wonderful response DT. Very good flowing rhyme. Good luck in the contest and peace be with you...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/6/2016 10:02:00 PM
Thank you Charlie for your friendly visits. Peace my friend:)
Date: 4/6/2016 5:11:00 PM
A very captivating write!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/6/2016 6:25:00 PM
Thank you. Jessica. I appreciate your kind comment and friendly visit. Peace young lady:):)
Date: 4/6/2016 3:39:00 PM
This is so splendid DT with just the right amount of imagery. The rhyme is spot on and the flow cant get any better...a fave for me.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/6/2016 4:06:00 PM
Tim, you're too kind. I appreciate your friendly visits. Peace my friend:)

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